Awakened by the impact, melodies
of passions apricot-possibility's.
I inhaled his garden ardently
honeysuckle's surrounding me.
Shivering; gait now unsteady
seared perfectly; the kiss.
Mesmerized in nature sunset haze
soft breezes brushed by.
Tropical desires; sweet mango's
you are forever in my dreams.
Author notes
Photo credit ~ "Opus in Orange"
©copyright May 31, 2008, Mary Coffman, all rights reserved
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A contest entry
- Opus in Orange by Mad Moon.
1000 points, ended June 22, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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Wow! Love your take on "orange," my friend! Just the first few lines....so much imagery! The title grabs you right away, and instills a wonderful vision before ever reading the words. Very well done. I read this several times to absorb all the beauty! Thanks for entering this gem in the contest, and Good Luck!
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