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And I ran beyond space and time..


Oh lady moon, who is forgetting me?
Enlighten me, brighten up my way..
Show me the road to my beloved
Take me to the absent one..
Isn't it time to draw my Berber identity
In the whisper of my empty pages
I shall carve the words in the sand
and write my heart in ink in my deserted land
Revealing the heart of me to myself
Yesterday I had plenty of time
I am woman so I dreamed a lot
I cast aside all my life burdens
With grace I took care of the night
I felt the universe residing in my hand
Then I ran beyond space and time
My day returned so fast, too soon
because the night didn't belong to me..

 

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  • ArchOblivion
    September 7, 2008

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    Very beautiful imagery and full of lots of fantastical things and emotions. Very ethereal. Thanks for your entry and good luck.


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    June 3, 2008
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    ... and you know that you are never forgotten, in your remembering;
    and 'not belonging to you', you respond to the delights of freely belonging to the loved one. The One who is never absent, though we come and go in our yearning.

    Another wonderful write from you.

    Sol



  • Topaze gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    Very nice piece, smooth flowing and well versed. Truly a wonderful write.