some
moments
in days there
rains openings
of bright fortune while
only a crowned head shall
act like a cup to receive
daily needs; a gift from unknown
source, not asking why, an immersion
clearify a dark void, hypnotic force
now a voice, it sings and disentangles
lighten poetic minds, feeding on
own ashes, connect bones to strange
energies, leafs rustle now
silence, rudimentair
still in present time.
gathering minds
season's move
our time
now
Author notes
A double etheree.
Syllable count: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1
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This is one of the best double etheree I have read.
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this is really good bro
i love you
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aw, thank you Sis! I love you too
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Beautiful double Etheree
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Thank you
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I really like this. I would never been able to think of how to do this one. You are very good,
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