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What Future

reliving past screams
and nightmares that bleed
the cold warmth of love forgotten
buried in the distant past
no longer recalling
loves heart beat
as it hangs still
like a dead man’s shroud
now just silence is left in my mind

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  • craftyangel43
    June 2, 2008

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    Very good write..showing your emotions. Very dark and sad. Great job. Thanks for sharing it Teresa..
    Cheryl


  • ckwriter69
    June 1, 2008

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    hmm this is dark and sad, Teresa. Hope all is well with you. Keep writing and expressing your feelings and emotions. Thanks for sharing.


    • Tears of Roses
      June 1, 2008
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      just a little something that ran threw my mind
      on it's way out the other side
      Roses to you Charley

      Teresa


  • Nothing But No
    June 1, 2008
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    This was beautiful within its sadness. Truly wonderful write. Best wishes,

    -Rodwen


    • Tears of Roses
      June 1, 2008
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      Thank you so much Rodwen
      Life has darkness and lite
      we take each as it comes.
      Roses to you,

      Teresa


      • Nothing But No
        June 1, 2008

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        You are more than welcome, in fact that you for posting this so I may read it. I couldn't agree more about life having darkness and light. If we didn't have both in our lives it would be impossible to find both joy and sorrow.

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