You are no fucking friend of mine
So don’t you dare hand me that line.
I promised my love I’d say nothing to you
But it’s not like anything you’d say is true.
You crossed the line this time, there’s no coming back,
How could you do this to me you god damned hack?
Its hard enough to keep my relationship with him afloat,
As the role of a good friend you’ll never get my vote.
Will you say you’re sorry this time?
Will you do what you always do and put your words to rhyme?
You’re a fucking liar, a bitch and a backstabber,
I hope to God no one listens anymore to your senseless blabber.
Thank you for betraying my trust,
How is this, in any way, just?
He yelled at me and he made me cry,
When will you learn to stop fucking lie?
What did I do to deserve what you did?
STOP ACTING LIKE A GOD DAMNED FUCKING KID!
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BRAVO (applauds)
I lost the love of my life once because my so-called best friend milked me for info on my man and played to his vulnerablities. They are now married with a little girl. Hurts like hell still...I totally understand. Again, BRAVO!!!! -mandie-
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wow.. powerful. I get what you mean. A friend of mine did the same thing to me, only made plans to sleep with my ex boyfriend that i still had feelings for. Your poem matches how i feel completly. Well done.
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I'm really impressed with this poem Brittany. You pulled the rhyme off wonderfully using some unconventional wods to do it. very emotional and its really easy to feel the emotion in this one. You did a wonderful job.
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Amazing
Holy smokes, that is an impressive job. I think this incident has unleashed a great piece of poetry. The rhyme you laid down is amazing and a great forewarning to anyone that messes with you. Good job gurl, you nailed it.
"You’re a fucking liar, a bitch and a backstabber,
I hope to God no one listens anymore to your senseless blabber"
That line is awesome because you totally got away with rhyming with blabber. A word i find ridiculous but you pulled it off. Lol again great work.
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Emotion always gives good poetry fantastic stuff Britty!
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This was cleansing & cathartic to get out, I'll bet. The truth stings when written in black & white and this was truly a painful read. Emotional, white hot anger. Good job~
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Only if I read this a few months ago... I would have totally vented with you about unworthy friends. -giggles- But, oh well, time moves on and you forgive but never forget, right? I love this poem, it was brillant <3333
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some people just need telling to give them a kick up there arse,well done here,it must have been good to get this out of your system
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