~*~
Cotton candy
softness
tasting me...
embracing me
with warmth
and wonderment.
The slightest hint
of teeth
starts my
very soul
to shivering
and my heart
pounding
My breath ragged
I wonder...
What will
your all be like
if I am already
paralyzed
by just this...
by just...
~*~
A contest entry
- Soft Words That Leave a Big Impact...Are you Up For It? by poet2angels.
800 points, ended June 9, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think ?
Comments
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Wow!!! I could never write anything like this!!! This is seductively beautiful!! Way to go!!!
Rey
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Oh my....
This is sweet with cotton candy softness and melts me, but the ending has such an impact just like I asked for...leaving one to ponder how much you tremble at
"What will
your all be like
if I am already
paralyzed
by just this...
by just..."
sigh....you really did capture what I asked for...
Lynda
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