I made a fool outta myself
How could I fucking lie like that? Make myself out to be a liar and full of broken promises
Oh my god...how could I do that to you?
I acted like sucha whore...a stupid little slut...just another fuck
I promised to be always there and not be like my mom
Promised to never break your heart and to love you
Im so disappointed in myself
Im a terrible person, I really am
I used "I dunno" and "cuz" to cover up my emotions and true feelings
Hate me please! Dont let me ruin your life anymore
I caused so much unneeded pain
Your poor heart...
Tell me to fucking die
I really want the best for you
Go find a nice, honest girl and find true happiness
...so I carve into myself one last time, to always remember and remind me of this fuck up
This cut felt so damn good...Ill never forget you
IM A FUCK UP
A contest entry
- Mistakes by XHollowXEyesX.
600 points, ended August 19, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
another fuck up
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wow this is full of energy and pure emotion.
I love the sense of freedom that the write has, doesnt seem like it has been edited over and over again, you have simply written down thoughts and done it beautifully.
Thanks for entering
All the best
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thank you, yea i try not to edit my work. ur welcome
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aww babe nobody's perfect.
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i guess. thanks
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good poem i like it
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thnks...
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This was really emotional, I know the feeling well.. It was the 'just another fuck' line that got me. Heartbreaking, but a good write.
All my best,
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thanks...*hugs*
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Erm....i dont know what to say.....its really sad, really really sad.
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lol its ok...aww
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Its not, well, true, is it?
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true yes...recent no
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Oh, thank god, you had me worried there for a while. Phew!!!
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lmao
ya
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nice poem i really am speachless about this, i dont know what to say, rember that i love you, ~Amy ♥
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thanks....love you too
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