I never thought you'd do this to me
You're making my dreams shatter
And turn into deathly nightmares
You've made everything I loved
Turn to nothing but dust
You're cruel, my dear
Yet, I let you take me
No matter how hard I try
My body can't get away
You've taken all control
We've past the point of no return
Now my body breaks in two
Pain grows as well as screams
I'm your's tonight
Sadly forever
I can't stop you
You just make the pain double
As that pain grows
I count in my head
It's the only way
To numb the feeling
In between my legs
Times like these
I wish my mouth was shut
I wish I never met you
Because you're nothing
But a nightmare to my head
Author notes
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There's the victim's point of view.
Uhm...*cough* Comment please?
Comments
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This is really good. A good write. I would change line 17 around though instead of "You just make the pain double" I would use "You just double the pain"
Other than that, Its great!
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