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God’s Butterflies

it is, but brief- upon the leafy branch
with courage, they toil on stems of hope
trees symbolic bear their breast,
to nurture them Nature’s love

and as the caterpillar gathers lush greens
and earthen fruits
the season turns, and their bed is made,
a chrysalis abode

within this oval pupa of love,
birthing extensions, are heaven's silent messengers

…emergent they become,
                      ~butterflies~
                                      with colorful wings
to carry your love and heartfelt wishes

far distant they fly,
to sit on God’s finger, and whisper his ear;

‘I’ll be there soon, with brother and son
please take care of them Lord…they are precious to me,
and I love them... very much.’




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For Kelle Marie, aka...stavykm

We are all butterflies~

he made us this way,
to sit on his finger

in colors of love,
he gave us

Malabu©2008

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  • Talking Toni gold member
    June 4, 2008
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    So Compassionate.......

    I know this will touch both Kelle and Pete as well as his brother{Kelle's husband} Bruce. This is so encouraging reminding us of all the diferent colos of our lives how God made us all so unique and different but alike in so many ways as well. Thanks for this thought provoking piece as well as the gentle approach you have taken at this time in his life!!!~~Toni~~


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    Malabu, this is lovely and so very true,God makes us his little pleasures of life to enjoy in another age of our demise....so very relaxing to read, thanks for sharing and as always good luck...
    Lin


  • stavykm gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Just Beautiful

    Butterflies so gentle and full of colors of love to fly upon Gods finger. This is such a beautiful poem. Just excellent really. The imagery, the deep spiritual meaning and the flow and rhythm was just perfect. This will be a hard contest to judge. Thank you for your loving compassion. Thank you so much for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    IN COLORS OF LOVE

    BEAUTIFUL Smile


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND.

    MY HOPE IS SOMEDAY WE ALL TURN INTO BUTTERFLIES.

    LOVELY WRITE

    GOD BLESS...


    • Malabu
      June 1, 2008
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      we are his butterflies
      and his flowers

      I believe this...


  • Candy6
    June 1, 2008
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    Very nice write

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