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Passing over the Veil. . .

Suffering the loss of loved ones
Does create great pain...
Especiallly knowing the days are limited!
However,
Enjoy each moment as if were the last!
For the beauty of life...
Is living
And tears only make it harder to face.
So if you have tears,
Make them happy ones
And the memories will last like treasures...
Always close to your heart,
Following you to your own demise!
Death is sad, yes
but
Death is a blessing sometimes too!
Writing of such hurt
After experiencing it already once
Is something you have to feel
I've been where you are now.
With the loss of fist one of my sisters,
Then my Mom and Dad.
So
All I can say is this...
Love your brother every day
And be sure you tell him while you can...
And both of your hearts will grieve less
For love conquers all, even in the end.
But really, passing over the veil,
Is not something to fear...
For one day you will all be together again!

dragonheart

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  • Talking Toni gold member
    June 4, 2008
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    Sounds Like You..........

    can totally relate to this contest...I am sorry for your losses as well...but you know you will see them once again beyond the shores of this earth. I know this touched Kelle and well as it will touch Pete, her brother-in-law. Thanks for sharing a heartfelt write detailing losses in your life too!!!~~Toni~~


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    The time for prayer is everyday,peace is always there, losses of life is never easy, as we all know, God has his hand gently upon them as they pass his way.. nice piece here ...good luck
    Lin


  • stavykm gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    So Beautiful

    Oh I'm so sorry for your losses too. This poem is just so lovely with such deep compassionate understanding being through it yourself. Thank you for reminding to talk and think of fun and happy memories. This is really good. This is the way I'd like it to be. I have this darling picture of him and Matt but also your precious poem to share with him. Thank you so much for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm