Sunday afternoon,
The clouds are a painting, the
ocean the canvas
A contest entry
- Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended June 6, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What be your thoughts?
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dude.. i am not going to bother to comment on the haikus kay.. i beleive you know why
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Sunday afternoon,
The clouds are a painting, the
ocean the canvas
A lovely look at creation, and the use of artistic comparisons within your haiku, thank you so much.
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clouds, sea and time to appriciate them...we should all be fishermen!
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A good opening line, stating the time of day, Sunday is often looked at as boring with people, a slow relaxation day. I like the clouds being artistic, with their brushes, soft and wispy which then take the ocean canvas and makes it their own. A creative outlook to the land and the sea, nicely penned.
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