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Soft wings

A blue winged butterfly
perched upon my thoughts today,

Soft wings taking my breath away.

As I watched petals falling
like snowflakes drifting in emptiness

I realised this is life...

This is happiness.














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  • janejainejayne gold member
    July 20, 2008

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    Brava!

    This beautiful and quiet moment was shared
    without having to disturb its pristine
    purity! Every word was perfection!
    Brava! Jane


  • just mercedes gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Beautiful thoughts. Soft, almost whimsical, but very true - these rare moments of pure happiness are life.