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Insomnia

Three o’clock in the morning
Sittin’ here thinking of you.
I’d been tossin’ and turnin’
Knowing not what to do.
I just have to be with you.
I can take the wait no more.
I’m gonna pack my bag, hop in the car
And mash the pedal to the floor.

Burnin’ it up the highway.
Stereo is playing loud.
I’m headed up to see you.
Getting’ away from this crowd.
Gonna wrap my arms around you
And never, ever let go.
I’m gonna hold you close, look in your eyes
And tell you that I love you so.

These dreams, they come every night.
These dreams, they must be a sign.
Someday, I’m gonna hold you tight.
Someday, you’re gonna be mine.

I wake up in the morning
Find myself alone in my bed.
All the love that we made
Was sadly, all in my head.
Baby, you gotta believe me
‘Cause what I say is true.
Someday soon we will have our time
‘Cause, my Baby, I’m in love with you.

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  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    Wow!
    I absolutly love this!
    I have a guy friend that i have been talking to for 2 years now i so would love to share your poem with him if you don't mind? Let me know.. This is so much like my feelings.. Wow you have said it right here.


  • BlackSwan
    June 9, 2008

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    I really like the rhyming in this poem! and nice way of writing it in the beginning and then turning it into a dream. Nice poem.
    I've had times where I wanted to just leave and see that person right away. Follow your dreams

    -GL in contest


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 8, 2008
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    Very good write

    I enjoyed this very much it holds such a joyous dream to live for


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    THis is absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed reading through this. I loved how wonderful this poem sounded, and then to find it was all a dream and you woke up alone in your bed. But in the end you know that you will be together. Great ending, well done.