come hold my hands my love,
feel free to kiss my lips.
your gentle hug my love,
how comfort to me it brings.
the trials we've been through,
are phases of life so true.
now we face our love so real,
the love that makes us near.
my hands holding on our branch,
on the tree of love we share.
i was suppose to fell down,
you were there to kiss and hold me.
you brings life to my weak self,
touching my heart and soul inside.
giving me reason to smile,
and makes everything colorful in life.
i will take care for you my love,
give you all that i can give.
bring your life the sweetness of love,
share together and makes us one.
the touch of our hands to each other,
makes everything filled with colors.
and the intimate kiss that we share,
shows how much we treasure ourselves.
you are an inspiration in life,
in all achievements and work i have.
you are one of the greatest blessings,
in life i will forever cherish.
Author notes
My inspiration in making this poem is the person to whom i dedicate it. I dedicate this to one of the greatest blessings that God had ever gave me. My inspiration in creating this poem is the person I love so much.
Love
Word bank: smile, blessings, cherish, intimate, achievements
Favorite Color: Red
A contest entry
- quotes, options, picture prompt by LoveDeprived.
1200 points, ended June 6, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
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600 points, ended June 11, 2008, 13 entries
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great job.
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Great job, nice flow and emotion throughout the piece!
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omg! this was great!
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This is so beautifully written. I really do like reading dedications. It made me smile.
I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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What a lucky soul!!!! Well crafted and heartfelt!!!
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Thank you for following the rules!
And for the wordbank
! Even though you went FOUR lines over the limit 
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Very beautiful in the emotion you've portrayed so carefully and wonderfully. I'm just not sure what moment's being described here... but that's fine ^-^. Good luck!
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Good job! Thanks for this lovely piece!
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oh this is very beautiful! i love the entire thing! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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you should have read the rules, *if you choose the options you would have to write something fresh; this being a prewrite, but since i lack entries and i cant deny a wonderful write, i would reconsider, i like a poem that has been written with passion and inspiration, and as beauty of silence says, great imagery, powerful emotions, this is grand!!
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This was simply wonderful! You portrayed such beauty, passion and simplicity into one amazing write! There was great imagery... powerful emotions that held the stanzas of this poem together >.< OOH! and your last stanza was lovely, especially the last two lines! loved them!
Beautiful! Best of luck in the contests! 
~Ranji
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