The pretty clouds above our little heads
never thought we'd look above to see
just to know we're still under the same sky
now you're there and I'm here
we're far apart in the world's measure
but surely the white clouds won't leave us
where they roam, I'll still be there
and you'll know I think of you often
for long ago we've created memories
out of nothing we believed in each other
we survived many storms, both small and big
I know this friendship will last
I know we'll relive those days again
when we survived on laughter and smiles
and we cried together to share the pain
we're fated to follow different dreams
but surely destined to be friends forever
Author notes
Option # 3 Clouds
A contest entry
- FRIENDS FRIENDS FRIENDS (not limited to my friends) by elmundopasa1.
450 points, ended July 1, 2008, 15 entries
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I know we'll relive those days again
when we survived on laughter and smiles
and we cried together to share the pain
we're fated to follow different dreams
but surely destined to be friends forever "
Wow, very well written. i like the lack of punctuation for it provides a feel of emotion and powerful feelings. very well done. this was very touching. thank you very much for entering!
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