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Fem Bots

painted face
silicone filled
implanted lust
bigger
'n bigger
fake nails
bleached haired
Marilyn Monroe's
doctor's experiments
fake as the centerfolds
playing out your fantasies

built
to fill your illusions
tantalize
'n tease you
cut apart
'n sewn together
seamed to a quilt
of your desires

the knife
taken through the truth
leaving
a race of copies
molded in plastic
melting
in the heat
living
to serve you

untouched beauty
innocence of God
lost on your eyes
in preference
of the pod people
altered
for your standards

liposuction
silicone
implants
collagen
needles
'n saws
tearing away
the plain Jane
unbandaging
a walking
talking mannequin
Frankenstein
scares you
gives you nightmares
but
the most fake of beauty
created in a lab
pleases you
as the fem bots
stomp towards you
lip luscious
'n chanting
"We are
What we're suppose to be
Illusions
Of your fantasy."

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 27, 2008
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    Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


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  • aidenspektor
    June 1, 2008

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    This is a really, really good entry. It's got a great message, and it's very cynical, which I like. Nice, nice job.