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If...

If I were to dream,
it would be of you.

If I were to love another,
that other would be you.

If I were to call you now,
would you talk to me?

If we were to go out,
would you dance with me?

If I held out my hand to yours,
would you take it?

If I pressed my lips to yours,
would you kiss me?

If I wanted to be with you,
would you want me too?

If I asked you for forever,
would you spend eternity with me?

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  • Swan song gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    Couplets like this can accentuate a poem and that is exactly what this did. Very good !!!!!


  • Weltt
    June 6, 2008

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    Simple and with a lovely flow to it. Thanks for sharing this wonderful little piece.