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Manhattan Dawn

  i

 

There is a moment to be savored

shut away from city bruits all seems gray

and still-sleeping

a necromancer’s hand

laid upon a queen’s bed

ripples and flat shapes that are

not yet a field of trees and a mirrored lake.

 

 

  ii

 

A hundred hundred glissandi

and the world goes Gershwin

 

and a thousand thousand kid’s balloons

fill the flushed sky

bubbling clouds

import a morning glory

bursting

   into city song

 

 

  iii

 

You’re there

I know you are

looking with young eyes

at those rising oblongs

 

(it took a dollar-mad imagination

 and the fearless girder-traipsing Mohawks

 to build them up from nothing)

 

as the balloons

fade out into the morning haze

the time comes

for Tropicana

      toast

      tea or coffee

a day to face

of yellow taxis

 

bustling sidewalks

 

snatches of Italian song

 

 

Author notes

This is a tribute, a poor emulation, and a muscling-in on a private world. Forgive me.

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  • Tirrell
    January 26

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    This is beautiful,
    you've captured the walk and waking bustle
    of busy city streets, most brilliantly.


  • Gagiikwe
    January 15
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    the Mohawks thank you

    Would do well as a Ferlingheti poem.


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      January 15
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      I wrote this because a friend threatened to and didn't. It's not a brilliant one. Thanks for the visit.

  • cirque du soleil
    July 23, 2008

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    Wow..i like this...

    I don't know what to say about it, but I do like it...a lot!

    Thank you for the entry.

  • Bad Bill
    June 1, 2008
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    I don't know the context here, Mairi, but I like the poem very much.

    Bill


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    I can't even begin to describe
    how this writing has made me feel,
    so I will just say this: Muscle in
    anytime...

    Love, Lane


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Superb
    or
    "Not Bad"
    You get to choose
    Either way it is Stonking.

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