i am a gorilla.
i have an easy life.
just sit back, relax, and be lazy.
i could eat bark and anything else
all the time.
be king of the jungle.
chase other animals away.
scare some tourists for
entertainment and
laugh at them.
but then there
are other gorillas.
i'll chase them
away to.
the life of a gorilla
would be nice, until
i get old like grandpa!
i would be slow and ned a cane
to use every time i moved!
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300 points, ended June 3, 2008, 11 entries
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This is funny to see what you would think about as a gorilla. LOL The grandpa joke at the end is really cute too. I could just picture this crazy gorilla.
Great job, and thanks so much for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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yes, that is fine.
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i'm just picturing an old grandpa gorilla walking w/a cane!! that's funny! congrats on the silver with this one!!! this was a good one!
*mom
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well dugh it's funny!!!!!!!!
it's my poem!!
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lol ^_^
Congrats on the silver!!
Why would you wanna eat bark?
Doesn't sound very tasty :/
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i don't know i'm a gorilla!!
ask my mom! she thinks she's a genious
on everything!!!!!!!!
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poor grandpa! I'm pretty old too ... not using a cane yet though. This is a very cute write. I like the grapic a lot. Thanks for entering
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thanks
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Being a gorilla would be awesome!! You could bench like 5000 pounds and beat up anybody. I'd probably be a linebacker in the NFL. OMG can you imagine a gorilla playing football. that'd be the shizzle.
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no i can't!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very good Gabe. You certainly have a big imagination. The picture goes well with the poem too. Thanks for entering, buddy. Good luck.
Brian
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