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in plain sight

Missing image

although it may appear
that I've kept it
far from all


it is hidden
in plain sight


waiting
for the one
who will simply try
to stretch the limitations
of their own heart
to reach
the key to mine

 

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  • Bob Fox
    June 20

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    romantic

    tis nice to read a soft romantic poem without it being laced with lust and sex. I am no nerd but methinks more of this type of writing is better suited for AP


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    June 12

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    Sweetly romantic, this holds love in quite a high position. A beautifully expressed poem

    ♥
    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • first forgotten
    June 1

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    how sweet. i can really picture myself in that position. although, after years of waiting, someone holds my key. this poem makes me cherrish the love i have. this peice is very powerful and moving.