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Forgotten...

 

 Abandoned in this hell,
     solitude my only companion,
I pray for the key,
  not only to release me from this chamber,
  but to rid me
          from the torture in my mind.


Memories
        of violation and corruption,
haunt me.
        as I stare at the rubble surrounding me.


A sheet remains,
         to protect what dignity i have left.
but hope seems to be fading away.

Save me?

Author notes

Based on the pic. Even though i missed the contest felt like doing it anyway lol.

Pic credit:
http://cherrilady.deviantart.com/art/secret-81178013

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  • Ali - Pie
    June 3, 2008
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    BEAUTIFUL. Excellent poem. Loved it!


  • sykotic
    June 3, 2008
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    i strongly admire this piece as it reminds me of so many of mine

    great job, and keep it up


  • Volfeng
    June 2, 2008
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    speachless


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    I love this too! I agree, it would surely be wearing gold! Wonderfully done!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    Opps

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Absolutely love this!! And I'm annoyed it didn't get into the contest cause it would be wearing gold!!

    Brilliant write sis!!
    xx


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 1, 2008

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    *throws you the anchor to save your life as she snatches your pain and drowns it with her*

    hugs...!.... great write.... thanks for sharing and rewards you with the imanginary Gold.......!!!!


    • Leila
      June 1, 2008
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      Awww! Thanks for the imaginary gold hehe!! xx

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