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since forgotten

can you see me
even if - I'm not
by your side

can you hear
the drumming
of my heart
aching to be loved

can you taste
the last kiss
I left
as my goodbye
till the next time
we meet again

can you feel
the heat of me
sleeping next to you
in my dreams

can you still smell
my perfume
when you walk
into the room

can you hear
my heart whisper
the words
we were not ready
to say
or even hear

or am I simply

a fading image

from a dream
you've since forgotten


unperceivable in every sense

simply a skipped beat
of your self inflicted
lonely heart

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  • Flowergirl
    June 21

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    wow that was awesome i loved it.......well keep up the good writing and look for my comments because i plan to read more..good luck...

  • Ronztrek gold member
    June 21

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    Touching

    Beautifully expressed words from a longing heart, one can only feel the emotions rendered here...So easy to relate too, you have done very well in putting these painful feelings into such a touching piece.

     

    Ron *rose*

  • OMG what an awesome write here..... very heart felt..! great job thanks for sharing and gooood luck in contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!