I can’t see my reflections in the water
I can’t cry to show you all my pain
I can show you the love of the heavens
as you hold me crying in the rain
I can drift away in my thoughts
as they wrap around your simple heart
Knowing of all imperfections
as I display my work of art
You dance upon my mind
like a virgin angel so fine
You occupy my time
a muse so hard to define
As you softly play upon my brow
as perfect as a lady who knows how
And the man that sleeps inside me
wanders in the emotions of here and now
Trickles of love shall find their way
in a cold dark love lost day
But I shall rise above it all
as my mind slowly crumbles in fall
A contest entry
- MYSTERIOUS BEAUTY by Swan song.
500 points, ended June 21, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very smooth and elegent poem. Well written and a joy to read.
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This shows alot of emotion, I love it
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This is a very longing poem, it exudes love for your make and does it in a very fine poetic way. Good luck and great poem.
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Wow....that was so beautiful. So simple and yet so beautiful. And you were able to rhyme it so well. I loved it. You deserve first.
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This is such a beautiful write. I really loved reading throught this with all its tenderness. Well done and all the best for the contest.
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