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Color Drained

I pass you bye
All alone, you dont see me cry
You try to walk through me
Only me you cannot see
A see through stain taking place
In the form that was my face
A little hope and a little faith
Almost led to brighter days
But then the color drained from my side
Literaly leaving me behind
Dieing for color to be set free
A feeling of invisibility
I am a thing with no point in seeing
Do I even have a point of being?
Oh I wish that you could see
All the color you drained from me.

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If ItS cOnFuSiNg SoRrY. i WrOtE iT aT 1:30 am.

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    This is an amazing take on how it feels to be invisibe. I love the parts about the color draining, because it's like you are fading/becoming invisible. Great job and congrats on the HM!