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A Flower




a flower
held in my hand
for you love











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haiku 3-4-3

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  • azure85 gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    a flower
    held in my hand
    for you love

    A very romantic haiku, and very sweet. Thank you so much!


  • sailor ptolema
    June 2, 2008
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    so sweet


  • DogFish silver member
    June 1, 2008
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    in its all simplicity
    expressing glorious joy


  • myron silver member
    June 1, 2008

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    romantic.

    nicely romantic!

    i like the first two lines. the third line perhaps closes the poem, whereas what i admire about good haiku is that they are open-ended and allow readers to interpret them.

    best wishes,
    myron.