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Surrender

I drew with stars

Conquered the untouched
Commanded the undiscovered
Created mountains and trees
I was Invincible
Four days, it took
Four
Short
Days

I played god amongst my toys
And ruled, and vetoed, and punished
Then I destroyed my world.
I destroyed my love.

Lacking the strength to part the seas,
nor to make bread many.
Four days to create but centuries to maintain.
I lost.

I plead for mercy
To my god.
It was not my world to create.
And now, I do not know how to desire.
But I pray.
I pray to the god I emulated.

Dear God,
All I needed was to believe in You.
I'm sorry.

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