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Frozen


Icy winds of deception
sweep away
love’s warmth.

My glacial heart
fractures
and sinks into
a sea of
darkness and tears.

Author notes

Prompt: Heartbroken Betrayal
Photo Credit: http://intricate-illusions.deviantart.com/art/Frozen-Heart-85872648
23 Words

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  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    June 2, 2008

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    The image and the poem really hits the note I was looking for. It was perfectly penned, and well all I can say is welcome to the finals!

    Thank's for entering!


  • Lucy.
    June 1, 2008

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    Devastatingly lovely! 'My glacial heart', love it! Good luck in the contest.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Ahh yes, I have been here! Wonderful imagery here that describes this picture perfectly and the emotion of a frozen heart!