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What's Done Is Done

 

This isn't what it was supposed to be
Never should it have been taken this far
I would have thought that you knew better
But apparently, I was all wrong

I wanted to be friends
But you couldn't seem to get over
the little things that drove us apart
Maybe we should go back to the start
Too bad you won't even say hi

I chose to let go
of everything you said to me
Not letting this get to me
even though it's ridiculous
And I've had about enough of this
But it seems like, you won't change

Don't test me or piss me off
You've done that enough already
I was going to be the bigger man
and walk away
But your grudge, it seemed to want to stay
and even when I'd gone away
It was still there

I'm not who you think I am
I'm not like everybody else
I am just me

 

 

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Laughter may be the best medicine, but writing sure does help too.

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  • movedon
    July 24, 2008

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    Laughter is indeed the best medicine ever. But writing can help you organize your thoughts. Deep emotions in this piece. I really heart what you were saying. Beautiful work.

    Warmest,

    Mylee


  • StarOfDreams23
    July 5, 2008
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    OMG! I LOVE THIS POEM< IT"S TOTALLY GREAT!


  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    June 11, 2008

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    you explained this very well. i felt like you said what's been going on in my head for a while now. well done my friend

  • celadia
    June 9, 2008
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    A good statement of individuality. Nice to stake your claim.


  • jogn
    June 8, 2008

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    Separation is tragic in it self. A need to want and be wanted is beautiful thing. To put it word starts the heeling. Let your past be your past and may your higher power protect and guide your future. I think message is clear but there is lack composition. Practice more passion in your writing.


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    June 7, 2008

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    For someone who says he is allright you realy handled a difficult situation very well.
    Thank you for your entry, and good luck in the contest.


  • Cannonsfire
    June 1, 2008

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    Oh I am glad you are ok, for this sounds like someone in a fair amount of pain...it is good to write it out and get it out there, the ache seems less that way. Love, C


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    I am fine. I just had to get something off my chest. But no worries, I'm okie dokie.


  • XBeautiful MistakeX
    June 1, 2008

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    WOW!!! and I mean wow..I JUST went through this same situation not even 2 days ago..and u took EVERYTHING I was feeling and put it into a poem...Great work..sorry u had to go through it too

    xoxo
    Oz


  • Blooming Poet
    June 1, 2008
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    are you okay?
    this seems to say something is up right now. great poem, and very emotional

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