I am my beloved’s and my beloved is mine
Be it heaven or hell, ‘til the end of time
His strength, touch and voice enthralled my mind
He lingers, forever and always
We’ve fought, tooth and nail, just not to depart
Though the whole world and more tried to tear us apart
We walk hand in hand and we walk heart to heart
I need him, forever and always
I’m entirely his – heart, mind and soul
He took all of me; without him I’m not whole
There’s no one to mourn for a life that love stole
I’ll keep him, forever and always
The way that he glows shames the stars in the sky
Each moment I’m with him I drown in his eyes
This butterfly feeling has got me so high
I’m smitten, forever and always
I’ll always be yours if you choose to be mine
Por siempre, el fin, ‘til the end of time
You walked out of heaven and captured my mind
I love you, forever and always
Author notes
Love option, of course
A contest entry
- quotes, options, picture prompt by LoveDeprived.
1200 points, ended June 6, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love and Emotional by Razor-Blade Romance.
1000 points, ended June 18, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 4 by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended September 6, 2008, 37 entries
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Comments
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Nothing like that pure love that you just give yourself completely to. Beautiful write, so sweet and uplifting. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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A beautiful poem.
What a fantastic write.
Well Done.
Im smitten to this poem. -
Goodness!!!, i love this, i like the feeling of this write, to want, love someone that badly, you rhymed it!! wonderful, hehe i did not noticed that you rhymed it until i reread it, i like almost everything of this write, the only thing i did not like is the repitition of the title ^^, sorry though, but despite that this write really stand out to me,
"The way that he glows shames the stars in the sky"
haha magnificent line i must say!, wonderful wonderful, so clever, it really blew me away, The way that he glows shames the stars in the sky, i could not help myself this line is too good to not repeat. ^^, clappy people its time to come out!!!!
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