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Chill!

It's cool hun,We'll get thru this,
You know I adore you and specially love you...
You don't have to pretend to make me smile,
I like you just the way you are...

Come on honey, don't act like a fool,
Just try to relax, we'll get thru this, I swear...
You don't have to hide your pain from me,
I'm there to help it cease...

Life is a wave,
It gets us high and then it gets us low,
You don't have to be someone else to proove me love...

Honey don't fake anymore,
You know I love you so,
Don't act a fool, trying to be cool,
You're better the way you are,
I love you the way you are....

So chill boy,
Don't let life consume you whole,
I'm here for you, be yourself,
you will fall and break down,
But I'll be there to make it better...
~♥~

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Life's like this you
You fall and you crawl and you break and you take what you get
Avril Lavigne
Complicated

"I'm here for you dummy!"-XXVampireeyesXX

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  • Blooming Poet
    June 6, 2008

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    This is great, just one thing, maybe using honey instead of hun would work better it avoids being chatty


  • Xianaria gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    "Life is a wave,
    It gets us high and then it gets us low,
    You don't have to be someone else to proove me love..."

    ~ good lines, well said. Good job!

  • Blooming Poet
    May 31, 2008
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    ohh yeah if that does not inspire contact me