I watched on TV
Documentary dated me
Keith and Peter hugging and jumping
They bayed at the moon, strumming and drumming
Together they crooned Who are you?
(I really want to know) Hoo? Hoo?
Staggered and swooned
Who are you?
Who are you?
Can we ever
Really
know?
I like
you
anyway
Author notes
I am the almighty enigma. Fear me. (OR NOT)
A contest entry
- Who are you? Who? who? Who? Members of Beautiful Minds Dark Addictions by islekine.
810 points, ended June 2, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Who are you... Really? by Rayn.
1050 points, ended November 10, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Silly love songs by ml12.
550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I found this amusing and I liked your reference to The Who. It was peculiar and that's the way I like it. The ending was sweet too. Cheers
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You have a way seemingly of winning gold trophies for what ever you enter. Oh, that is just silly me not catching the lesson you teach on how to enter these contests. I love your work and your intuitive style regardless of what the subject matter is. You excel above what I can perceive or draw from. I try to understand, but I fall short. RC
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Congrats on that Gold!
You have a gift.....time to show it off :)
God bless,
Bear ~
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Loved this write ~
To the point...yet curious thoughts abound ~
I sure wish I could give you a hug after reading this......not sure why....just touched me in a weird way I guess ~
Good luck and God bless you!
Bear ~
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You did, man.
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LOL.....I love it....
You can tell I dated myself...too...with the title...
...Thanks..nice to meet you!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Hoo! Hoo!
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