Forever is not a number
Looking in your eyes, I see an eternity
Of love, stretching before me
We can last forever
Every second that I spend with you
Is another passed, content
Seeking warmth in each other’s arms
Loving indiscriminately, unconditionally
No longer do I cry alone at night
Wishing to have you near
I warm myself from the comfort
Of knowing you will be there
I will always be there for you
No matter the crime, the issue
Ready to hold you, to let you cry
To have a life together
One day, everyday, when we grow up
The life we dream of, will be ours
A fairytale fantasy in real time
We can last forever
Author notes
Quote inspired:
"Every little look inside your eyes
Is all it takes to make me realize
We can last forever.
With every little moment we can share,
Gonna let you know how much I care;
I'll always be there."
We Can Last Forever By Chicago
A contest entry
- Lyrics Everywhere by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended June 15, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - .:LOVE:. by chore2chore.
330 points, ended July 16, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is sweet poem, and related to it.
Great write
-Kas K Bubbles
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This is a beautiful poem!!!!
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Wonderful flow and rhythm to this piece. And, the message is one that warms the heart. You write a very delicious poem.
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I like how you incorpreted the prompt into the title and various lines of the poem.
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I really like the innocent joy of being in love that you've expressed in this write...
"One day, everyday, when we grow up
The life we dream of, will be ours
A fairytale fantasy in real time
We can last forever"
May you always hold onto this!
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Good enjoyable write, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest (=
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"Every little look inside your eyes
Is all it takes to make me realize
We can last forever.
With every little moment we can share,
Gonna let you know how much I care;
I'll always be there."
We Can Last Forever By Chicago
If that does not inspire you contact me.
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