One moribund petal
crushed unknowingly
~a soft kissing
ripping clouds
to shower sapphire drops~
Posing embrace
they shiver.
~strangers forever~
Author notes
Its a bit cliched but its been long...
A contest entry
- Strangers in August by Gypsy-Princess.
400 points, ended June 1, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful write. Great imagination and excellent poem written with precision. Keep feeling great. I would be happy, if you could spare some time to stamp your impressions on my poems.
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I like it. good write
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Very expressive and detailed... x
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LOVE this!
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glad to hear that!
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