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Inquiries Of The Mind

Withered away in monotonous thoughts,
Sweet cherry blossoms filled with tragic song and sorrow,
Fall upon deaf chasms.

Dark pools cold as death, gaze wearily at what once was,
Savory remorse stains porcelain apples,
As fountains of memories unfold.

Cradled in the arms of misery,
Burden heavy limbs caress innocence,
Receding to the cracks of time.

Graceful queries run deep through wrinkles,
Thrashing at sanity’s hold,
As beauty turns to ash.

Withered away in monotonous thoughts,
Vicious roses of crimson lacerate sweet enigmas,
Insinuating a sullen demise.

11-14-06

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  • Crazy-Love
    June 5, 2008

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    Wow!
    You have such a magical way with words!
    I Loved every bit of this poem! Its so crazy that You know such 'smart words' I absolutely love them! lol.
    Keep on writing, so that I can have more to read!


    • StoneColdAssassin
      June 6, 2008
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      Haha, thank you! I got this one published in a poetry book. But it was one of those were the only why they don't publish it is if it has profanity or racial cause or things like that so... Anyone, writer's block and procrastination are the reasons for my lack of writing so. Blame them! Ha ha! ^_^