You knew from the start
how I felt for you, how
I fell for you, the very
first time I laid my eyes
on you
As we became friends and
got closer, I was unaware
that my confession of love
for you would only make me
a fool in the end
You swore to me, that night
that you'd never hurt me and
never make me cry, but here
I am picking up the shattered
pieces of my broken heart
You smashed it into and you
know that as bad as it hurts
me to say, I love you enough
to forgive you and take you
back and it ain't right...
Author notes
"Sad and it's not fair
How you take advantage of the fact
That I... love you beyond the reason why (why...)
And it just ain't right"
Hate That I Love You by Rihanna
In a list
A contest entry
- Lyrics Everywhere by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended June 15, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good one Jeremi!
Powerful work of poetry! The emotions can get to a person just reading this. THANKS FOR SHARING!!
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Great poem, definitely better than the song.
Sorry, I'm a rocker. Anyway, the poem was good. I'm sure anyone could relate at one time or another. In fact, I know of quite a few. This is where I shall make the link between this poem and the abuse poem you wrote about 3 weeks ago. Connect the dots, I'm sure you get it. -
Beautiful poem, so stunning in every way. This really almost brought me to tears. if you want another prompt feel free to reserve again, since it is unlimited entries.
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"Sad and it's not fair
How you take advantage of the fact
That I... love you beyond the reason why (why...)
And it just ain't right"
Hate That I Love You by Rihanna
contact me if that does not inspire
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