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Our last hope





With subliminal second imagination
  a voluntary detachment
  solely for entertainment
  records minds powers
  to overcome the last mission.

If the key surrenders
  so shall death.

With beliefs in hallucinations
....he live
foresaking reality
painting torn wallpapers.

~goodnight saviour~




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40 words exact!
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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 12, 2008

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    If the key surrenders so shall death, quite a statement to be expressed.
    Great poem.

    ♥
    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Wow! You do take the mind to different dimensions so brilliantly! What a great take on the picture. Best of luck in the contest.