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Her soft death






She sighs
  her lovely petals
    shattering
      as if wounded hearts
      consoled
      by rosy cheeks
      relinquished
  in soft loyalty
~yet again~





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  • notorious
    May 31, 2008

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    This certainly sounds like a "soft death" as the title would imply. Great verb usage of 'relinquished' and I like the phrase 'in soft loyalty'.

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