I told her some
didn’t know hat to expect
if she could keep them
I’d tell her the rest
simple little secrets
that everyone had
like who you liked
and who you couldn’t stand
so one dat I told her a secret
about a girl I didn’t like
we swore not to tell anyone-
especially her
because along with my secret
she had told me hers
this wasn’t the first time
she had shared things with me
but no matter what they were
I always kept them to me
I kept her secrets
safe and sound
not even the let one out
this little secret
was her test
if she could handle it
and not go around and blur
I anxiously waited
to see if she could stay true
but as I soon found out
she could not stay true
she told all my secrets
to everyone near
she even the one
I had hated for years
I couldn’t believe her
I just wanted to scream
how dare she hurt me like that
she said she loved me
so never trust a friend with your secrets
cause you’ll never now what there do
it’s best to keep them inside
and tell them just to you
never tell your secrets
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Wow! This was incredibly amazing
! I loved it, specially 'cause I know how this feels.
Before, I never trusted anyone with my secrets; kept them to myself. I mean, hey they are MY business. But then, one year, I made a GREAT friend. I trusted her with EVERYTHING, literally. Then I told her this huge secret, and the next day in school everyone knew about it. I got soo pissed at her! Like, Who the *bunny* does she think she is??!!
So then, yeah, we are not friends anymore....
lol, but i learned teh hard way unfortunately, so this poem really hit home run.
I loved it!!
Really great!
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Powerful Poem.
I relate to this. The same thing happened to me with my "friend."
My favorite part of the poem is:
so never trust a friend with your secrets
cause you’ll never now what there do
it’s best to keep them inside
and tell them just to you.
This is a powerful poem with a powerful and true message.
My only criticism is that I noticed a few spelling mistakes. No big deal though. Great job with this poem.
I really enjoyed reading it.
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that my fav part too
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i tell my secrets to strangers, but never my friends...
well, the poems good
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