Real as the air that no one can see
Solid as the sturdiest Redwood tree
I create a shadow in the light of the day
and walk around obstacles that get in my way
I cast a reflection just as you do
and cry salty tears just like you too
My existence is as certain as the floor where you stand
even though distance keeps me from holding your hand
Just open your eyes and open your heart
and know that I'm with you even when we're apart
For I am as real as anything could even be
A real red-blooded woman this person is me
A contest entry
- Intensity by notallowedtocry.
750 points, ended June 3, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be courteous and comment..NO rude or critical critiques please.
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I just love this so much I am just gonna applaud you
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Excellent
Wow, some creation you have penned. So very powerful. Best of luck in the contest.
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I really like this poem, its short and gets to a point. And because it's like this you get all the Intensity of a long poem in a short space making it all the better to read. Well Done and Good luck hunni XxX
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This is an excellent poem and best of luck in the contest
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beautifully penned hun, best of luck
Tasha
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