Death looks me in the eyes
to the grave I take these lies
fear of a dark place
another life built of hate
all these years put to waste
six feet of death to taste
where to go from here now
what god will have my soul to allow..
your tought and raised not to go to hell
but as I start to see this is were I fail
I'm far away from the sound of sweet bells
I can feel my hands on the wall pinned by nails..
whose to judge me when I'm dead
who will pick up the tears I shed
at my funeral who will have cried
how many of you will be glad I died
will the one I love show her face
or will she have forgotten my place
what if no one cares for me anymore
and passes by the blood on the floor..
death is just opening my next door
so if no one cares I wont anymore
so let me fall to the next life
dont care about the bloody knife..
all I want to know..is..
who will say they love me when I'm DEAD!!...DEAD!!!...DEAD..
A contest entry
- Death... by MissStranger.
1000 points, ended June 7, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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I really loved this poem! the end is a little overblown but otherwise really good! thanx for entering!
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wonderful title!rally caught my eye! not mentioning that the poem is fantastic!well done indeed!thnak you for entering and good luck!
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wow... i really like it... i dont even know wat to say... it has my own meaning that prolly isnt urs, but hey everyones different
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