Venomous scarlet runs through my system,
Consuming every piece located in my insides...
Incubating all the quantum moments of massive disturbance...
Leaving me with breathless remnants of my past..
And to evade the feeling, is as impossible as telling,
The why I'd loved you for Oh so long...
Even I, can't answer that...
Ripping walls of pain, crumble inside,
Feels like a rush of rum had ran into my throat,
But the liquid is not transparent...
Despair holds me,concluding the ever longing ending;
Sedating the thought that this pain will never cease;
As scarlet rivers run out of my lips, I breathe no more...
This sickness finally sickens me and beats me down!
The violet memoirs of our remaining sickness,
transfix the decadence of a goodbye...
Forever the feelings are shattered and life consumes the best...
And I have become ill,
And the morphine liquid runs my veins slowly,
Numbing thy pain but hurting the wounds...
I am lovesick
~♥~
Author notes
"Love is sickness and yet is love."-XXVampireeyesXX
A contest entry
- That was you? Omg I'm sorry ( For Everyone :] ) by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
450 points, ended June 24, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Broken Heart by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended July 31, 2008, 118 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Is Illness by AbbyxGrace.
700 points, ended August 18, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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this is totally amazing...great, great job......thanks for entering and good luck
AbbyxGrace -
Wow very interesting i like it alot its very very well written and worded so greatly. And plus you made the point that you were trying to make. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
I absolutely loved this piece, a great deal because I'm lovesick right now. The guy I've liked for about 7 months has decided to ask me whether or not he should ask out another girl, even though he knows my feelings.
-Les<3 Great job and keep on writing -
damn love.... can i have some morphine??? hehe....
ok now on to the poem... what an awesome write... thank for sharing and i like the pic too...
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