I can plant any seed
to make my ego rise...
Author notes
5.
Truth is beautiful, without doubt; but so are lies.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE TIME :) Quote Prompt! by OnceUponAMind.
600 points, ended May 31, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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How clever!!!
How clever!!
Your title sounds like a movie or a best-selling novel (if a book is ever released with that title, it's because I stole it.
Haha, but seriously). It's a great title.
The poem itself is brevity x cleverness=a great poem. The seed aspect connects with the garden theme well and the mention of an ego rising is quite interesting to imagine...what do egos look like?? Anyways, fantastical write. =]
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wow baby now this i like..... awesome write here and congrats but seems way more then just an HM....!!!!!
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I love this! I know a few people who lie to others, just to make themselves feel better... NO matter who it hurts in between. Such truth here
Thanks for entering 
And great thoughts on the quote!
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THis is splendid! What I would say out of the box! Awesome work LB!
pri
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Nice take. hehe Best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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Great! Nice choice Seems to be the favorite so far
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