Live blue
That’s what you do
Swirl about and swim free
Under the cover of the sea
Swim the current and the tranquility
Paddle through waves so independently
Swim with others or on your own
Let sunshine give you tone
Ocean’s surprise
Green eyes
Author notes
ascending and descending cinquain
A contest entry
- Pcture Prompt by stavykm.
450 points, ended June 6, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You write so eloquently.
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Lovely Cinquain
Hi, You have penned a beautiful poem. Your imagery is stunning and takes the reader into the depths of the ocean and its aquatic life. Best of luck in the contest. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, I deeply appreciate it!
Brazos
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Time for us to go scuba diving, and take in the beauty of the ocean. Somewhere in the tropical islands...I loved this because it gave the an oceanic desire...Great write baby........
novy
I love thee...
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Yay, sea turtles!
I love how this form makes a diamond shape when centered. Wonderful take on the prompt. Your rhyme is almost perfect, nicely done. Keep your pen to the page and good luck in the contest! -
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Thank you, my friend.
Say, weren't you just talking about Lovecraft a bit ago? I want to be an alien, lol!
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How Lovely
So serene I could feel myself swimming with the turtles in your lovely poem.
Swirl about and swim free
Under the cover of the sea,
I loved the way you made the poem into a diamond. I don't know what kind of form you call it, but it is wonderful. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
Many Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, and many thanks as well for having the contest.
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