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Why I'm Still Here.

I remember that day: I was
looking out the window at
the fading black-and-white
image of your car going
toward the horizon. 

I don't want to say it's
just like those antiqued films
with swooning girls hoping
their man will come home.

But it is.

Any good?

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    This was more than good.


    Thank you for sharing.


    • HagarenHanyou
      May 31, 2008
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      You're Welcome.

      Though, it'd be even better if reservers didn't take up spots where poetry should have gone. (=slight bitterness) =]