Stark white walls,
paneled white blinds,
on the one way glass windows.
Starched sheets of clean linen.
Glistening dialysis,
filled with urine colored,
liquad,
the only color in this,
canvas of greys and shades,
of white.
Even your hand,
is pale and as cold as snow,
that is covering my own,
is white.
I feel it growing colder,
the lights from your eyes are fading,
oh please baby,
don't go.
Tears stream down my face,
and your eyes search mine,
and you choke out your last words,
for me.
"Don't cry baby girl, please,
Smile for me."
I look into his eyes,
and smile as hard as I can,
while sobbing,
I see the light fade back into them,
as his heart's music,
slowly dies,
and his grip slolwy loostens.
Oh baby I don't ever stop smiling for you,
every smile I make now,
is for you,
and only for you.
Author notes
Prompt- Missing you
Ok, DISCLAIMER:: This is NOT based off an experience of my life. this has NOT happened to me.
It's just what I got from the prompt.
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie by Cerulean Sunrise.
1000 points, ended June 1, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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liquad? Liquid maybe.
That's a sad poem..
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wow, this is pretty incredible for just coming up with it. great job and good luck!
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Haha Stupid me thought it was a quickie and only did 10 lines oh well lol this is great darling love you very much goodnight precious
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wow. that is pretty passionate for one that just came to you. you really are a pretty talented poet. fantastic job jadey. :-)
~David
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