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I wasn't content with life that day

I wanted to run away right then

But then something came, so unexpected

Something I never thought could happen


 

The reaper came to get me that night

But I wasn't prepared, not ready

I didn't want to go with him

He made me so damn unsteady


 

He wrapped his cold hand around my wrist

I felt the claw of the beast

He stole away my heart, my soul

But not my mind, at least


 

I heard the devil's song in my head

And knew I had to get away

I saw it from a different point of view

And watched my body decay


 

My mind lost touch with reality

And slowly I began to fall out of sane

I wandered so dark and so alone

And then I started to feel the pain


 

Life was tormenting, but not like this 

By myself, I was so sad

Not bloodied, not scarred, but I felt the wound

I never thought death would be this bad


 

My body rotted, day by day

Until finally nothing was left

I watched forever, till the end of time

The devil was cunning, skillful and deft


 

This was my Hell, my eternal rest

But rest I did not at all

I saw the devil himself one day

And that is all I recall


 

Death had finally made it's mark

I faded away into the dark



 

 

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I really liked this contest, so I felt I had to write something.
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  • robforte
    July 16

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    deep and dark!

    "Death had finally made it's mark

    I faded away into the dark"

    this is a striking piece of work!
    great imagery!

  • This is an amazing write!
    It's so skillfully pinned and something we should all think about before giving in.
  • I love this poem! It was quite sad tho but i bet youll do good in the contest!!

    • Thank you, thank you, thank you!!
      Go back and read my other poem " [ I Love You ] "
      I really like it!
      BUT :
      Thank you, thank you, thank you!!
      :->

  • Akarian silver member
    June 2
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    lovely and so sad, and so beautiful!


  • lemonhead
    June 1

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    I love it! Great rhyme! I can imagine it well and its soo interesting!!! <3 Keep writing! Your gonna win i know it

  • love it cori cori <3 <3 <3 great job i hope you win the contest!!!


    ~maddie

  • 3xBravo!

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