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For Danny. I miss you.

 

Sleepless nights

    have caused my mind to wander.

 

I find myself

      in a moment of happiness.

Embraced in your arms,

feeling the warmth of your body against me.

 

I smile, and tell you I love you.

Promise you that it will be forever.

 

But forever

ended.

 


As I lay a red rose on your chest,

I notice

      you look paler than usual.

Your lifeless body

            has lost its twinkle.

 

I pray

      for just one more moment with you.

But my prayers go unanswered.

 

Refusing to give up,

I will keep this picture clutched to my heart.

Wishing

        that it was more than just a memory.

 

But I promise,

      we will be together soon.

 

'Cause baby, I meant it when i said

                                            forever.

 

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Prompt: Missing you.



R.I.P Danny Byford.
17th May 1987 - 15th May 2008

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    heartfelt


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 1, 2008

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    sorry i dont know who he was... but you sure do seem to love him...... this is an awesome write.... very very good take on prompt.... a sure winner in my book! thanks for sharing...!!!!!!!!!!!


    • Leila
      June 1, 2008
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      He was my boyfriend.
      But thanks for the lovely comment xxx


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    This is so beautiful sis! So sad!!

    A beautiful tribute to Danny... touched my heart!

    Love you
    xxx