They found her body hanging from the ceiling.
Can you see her?
Watching you Through her eyes Can you see?
Do you believe?
Will you save me?
As you struggle within your noose, what was your last thought?
Just cut your rope... You could of been saved... Just cut your rope
A contest entry
- the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your thoughts and feelings... by invisible2u.
600 points, ended February 6, 69 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your oldest prewrite poems and my 20th contest by stargazer..
650 points, ended April 20, 417 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow...original, for sure! But it kind of lost me... line 6&7 made sense but the rest just didn't click...it could just be me, though!
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wow this poem is soo dark .. i love it all .. usually i dont read dark poems because they sadden me but i think this one actually enliend me .... i love it ... i think you should try a love poem and see how that go's!!
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nice write.
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nice! Wow it's so dark... love it
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this is great, just one little request I have for you to do for me. Could you putt the option number in AN. Thanks
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