Why is it that those we love
Always seem to be hurting,
And we are unable to help?
I feel helpless,
All I want to do is
Remove this heavy burden
From your suffering shoulders
And carry your pain myself.
I deserve that burden.
You do not.
You are so much like me
That it hurts you to see
My hurting for you.
It's a never-ending circle of pain.
Why can't a circle have an end?!
I love you, though I've just gotten to know you.
I'd do anything for you,
And ask for nothing in return.
I'll pray for you with all my heart,
Though I can never replace your old friend,
And I will do whatever you ask
So that your suffering may end.
Oh God, please let it end.
Hang in there,
You have so many people
Who love and care for you.
You are not alone.
With all my heart,
I hope your suffering ends,
I feel so helpless, sis,
For I cannot help you.
I just want to help you.
You really are amazing,
No matter what you say.
I'll always be here for you.
Always.
I love you.
Always.
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wow, this poem of yours, its great. so beautiful. so breath taking. you are an amazing poet. i am so glad i read this poem of yours. i miss you bro!
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I miss you..
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This is beautiful, a lot of love and sadness pours out of your words. You are showing a lot of kindness for your sister =]
You did a wonderful job, this poem is amazing.
~Kaela
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this is so swweet... its a great write
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woahh you're an amazing poet!!! keep writing man, cuz this was deeeppp. great peice.
danielle<3
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ahh, i love you. you are aammmazzzzing! and i miss you. it seems like i havent talked to you in forever. hope you are doing good.
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Beautiful, she is one luck girl to have you care so much about her. This is a powerful and emotional piece. I absolutely loved it.
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yes i am a lucky girl indeed becuase hes one super amazing guy. and i am proud to be able to call him my brother. <3
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I'm glad he takes care of you like that.
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thanks. =] me tooooo.
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Beautiful, once again. It reminds me a lot of how I feel towards one of my best friends. Really great once again. She's going to have to read this.
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Which best friend would that be?
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oh brother,..
you are so amazeing
i love you -
This is beautiful sweety you have a heart of gold
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Oh David this is beautiful and exactly what she needs. To see that she can keep going. I love you
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btw this part really hits my heart hard. you are amazing. sweet. kind. caring. and so much like me.
"I love you, though I've just gotten to know you.
I'd do anything for you,
And ask for nothing in return." -
you do not deserve this pain at all. no matter what you could have done or are yet to do, you do not deserve pain. so please dont think that. thank you. and you do help. so dont think you dont. knowing certian people care helps a lot. taking the time to talk to me helps. it shows you care. and that helps. so dont think u dont help. you are really sweet. i love you. and i'll be okay eventually.. it will all be fine..
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