Staying true
Being you
So hard to stay
Feel this pain
Its My pain
Something you did
I wish I didn't
You don't care
I'm left, alone
Theres nobody here
My lines stop flowing
The words just spill
I can't quit
Like you couldn't
Stop
No love there, None
No care here, Gone
Wait one moment
I want it back
Me
Why did I let you have
Me
Author notes
It has been a Crazy Long time since I've even thought of writing something.
Uhm, I was up late the other night, and just figured I should give it a try.
In a list
Please just let me know what you thought of it.
Comments
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I like this.
The lines are short it gets straight to the point -
strong on message
gotta love the true grit in these lines.. i am a firm believer in taking back ones power or never letting go of it
another great write
~teddybare~
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This is pretty good for not writing in AGES! ^_^ I got a little lost though, but *shrugs* I figure you can just explain it to me! ^_
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